Word order and markedness in a Slovenian poem and its English translations

english

2004

volume 1, issue 1/2

Univerza v Ljubljani, Filozofska fakulteta, Znanstvena založba
(Obvezni izvod spletne publikacije)

When systemic differences between languages preclude the possibility of a truly "faithful" translation, the translator may choose to preserve either theform of the original, that is its syntactic structure, or its function, which includes not only the meaning but also stylistic eff ects such as the degree of markedness. Faithfulness to the original form may result in a diff erent degree of markedness in translation, or even in a reinterpretation of the structure, with a concomitant change in meaning. On the other hand, the preservation of the original function by introducing structural devices congenial to the target language may obscure the original cohesive devices, including fi gures. Since the balance between form and function is particularly delicate in poetry, this paper examines the choices between them in two English translations of "Belo", a free verse poem by the contemporary Slovenian poet Dane Zajc. The central issue discussed is the ordering of constituents, which is dominated by different principles in the two languages. Since both form and function play a vital role in poetry, such an analysis cannot yield a formula for each type of translation problem; nevertheless, it can locate the points of divergence in the source and target languages, as well as use the translatorsć choices to draw conclusions about the nuances of acceptability in the target language.

11.03.2021